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New song up on my music page - CHECK IT OUT!!
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Mon Apr 10, 2006 3:34 pmby bigmahon
It's called [b:8cabc5717e]If I Told You[/b:8cabc5717e]. Would love to hear your comments.
As always, thanks for listening!
bigmahon
[url=http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=460772]If I Told You[/url]
Posted:
Tue Apr 11, 2006 4:38 amby bigmahon
Bump for those who missed it. :)
I know most of you don't care, but I know some of you do. :wink:
Posted:
Tue Apr 11, 2006 7:58 amby cirills
I like the basic melody Chris, but I found myself wanting it to pick up tempo more in places. It had more of a beat than a ballad would, but I felt myself waiting for an allegreto that never came.
I did like the basic hook however. :)
Posted:
Tue Apr 11, 2006 9:21 amby Play By The Rules
Hey, some melody!!! Here, here!
I liked this one best of any I've heard so far. Nice work!
Posted:
Tue Apr 11, 2006 4:07 pmby bigmahon
Larry and Doug, thanks for listening! And I really appreciate your feedback!
Cheers guys! :D
Posted:
Tue Apr 11, 2006 4:46 pmby Essex Moosemen
Shows how little I know about what goes on around here. I didn't even know that we had a rock star in our midst.
I'm no expert (like Simon Cowell or anybody) but I dug it.
Well done. Who knew--I thought yopu just kicked my butt in SOM. :?
Posted:
Tue Apr 11, 2006 7:10 pmby YountFan
Nice track Big. I like it a lot. The guitar figures are sweet.
YF
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Tue Apr 11, 2006 9:17 pmby STEVENMCNAMEE
Hey, I think you have talent and have put something together that sounds good. However, I felt that it went a little to long between melody at times.
Overall, I liked it enought that I am going to listen to more of your stuff.
Good Job
Posted:
Wed Apr 12, 2006 10:12 amby bigmahon
Hey fellas, thanks for listening!
[b:9233d7c174]Essex[/b:9233d7c174], I'm pretty sure Simon Cowell would hate it! :wink:
[b:9233d7c174]YF[/b:9233d7c174], thanks bro!! :D
[b:9233d7c174]ryno[/b:9233d7c174], I appreciate the feedback. I do think I might make it a little more compact. 8)
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Wed Apr 12, 2006 11:51 amby bleacher_creature
Chris,
Sounds pretty good. Nice vocal work, double tracking etc...
What kind of drum programming was done?
One section has a beat goes back to the 50's with the hit on two & four, plus the "and" of 4. Next time you program that, I suggest you vary the dynamics so that the "and" is a little louder. This way, it will sound less machine like.
Another thing I hear (that is not there :) ) are some guitar fills between the vocal lines. There is a lot of space where nothing is happening. Someties this is good, but I think this tune needs it.
Please don't be offended. I'm just an opinionated drummer. 8)