It's called [b:8cabc5717e]If I Told You[/b:8cabc5717e]. Would love to hear your comments.
As always, thanks for listening!
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by bigmahon » Mon Apr 10, 2006 3:34 pm
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by cirills » Tue Apr 11, 2006 7:58 am
I like the basic melody Chris, but I found myself wanting it to pick up tempo more in places. It had more of a beat than a ballad would, but I felt myself waiting for an allegreto that never came.
I did like the basic hook however. :)
I did like the basic hook however. :)
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by Play By The Rules » Tue Apr 11, 2006 9:21 am
Hey, some melody!!! Here, here!
I liked this one best of any I've heard so far. Nice work!
I liked this one best of any I've heard so far. Nice work!
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by Essex Moosemen » Tue Apr 11, 2006 4:46 pm
Shows how little I know about what goes on around here. I didn't even know that we had a rock star in our midst.
I'm no expert (like Simon Cowell or anybody) but I dug it.
Well done. Who knew--I thought yopu just kicked my butt in SOM. :?
I'm no expert (like Simon Cowell or anybody) but I dug it.
Well done. Who knew--I thought yopu just kicked my butt in SOM. :?
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by STEVENMCNAMEE » Tue Apr 11, 2006 9:17 pm
Hey, I think you have talent and have put something together that sounds good. However, I felt that it went a little to long between melody at times.
Overall, I liked it enought that I am going to listen to more of your stuff.
Good Job
Overall, I liked it enought that I am going to listen to more of your stuff.
Good Job
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by bigmahon » Wed Apr 12, 2006 10:12 am
Hey fellas, thanks for listening!
[b:9233d7c174]Essex[/b:9233d7c174], I'm pretty sure Simon Cowell would hate it! :wink:
[b:9233d7c174]YF[/b:9233d7c174], thanks bro!! :D
[b:9233d7c174]ryno[/b:9233d7c174], I appreciate the feedback. I do think I might make it a little more compact. 8)
[b:9233d7c174]Essex[/b:9233d7c174], I'm pretty sure Simon Cowell would hate it! :wink:
[b:9233d7c174]YF[/b:9233d7c174], thanks bro!! :D
[b:9233d7c174]ryno[/b:9233d7c174], I appreciate the feedback. I do think I might make it a little more compact. 8)
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by bleacher_creature » Wed Apr 12, 2006 11:51 am
Chris,
Sounds pretty good. Nice vocal work, double tracking etc...
What kind of drum programming was done?
One section has a beat goes back to the 50's with the hit on two & four, plus the "and" of 4. Next time you program that, I suggest you vary the dynamics so that the "and" is a little louder. This way, it will sound less machine like.
Another thing I hear (that is not there :) ) are some guitar fills between the vocal lines. There is a lot of space where nothing is happening. Someties this is good, but I think this tune needs it.
Please don't be offended. I'm just an opinionated drummer. 8)
Sounds pretty good. Nice vocal work, double tracking etc...
What kind of drum programming was done?
One section has a beat goes back to the 50's with the hit on two & four, plus the "and" of 4. Next time you program that, I suggest you vary the dynamics so that the "and" is a little louder. This way, it will sound less machine like.
Another thing I hear (that is not there :) ) are some guitar fills between the vocal lines. There is a lot of space where nothing is happening. Someties this is good, but I think this tune needs it.
Please don't be offended. I'm just an opinionated drummer. 8)
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